The Full Text of “Eden Rock”
The Full Text of “Eden Rock”
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“Eden Rock” Introduction
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"Eden Rock," a poem by 20th century English poet Charles Causley, is a meditation both on death and on the nature of family bonds. In the poem, the speaker sees a vision of his parents as they looked in their early twenties, setting up a picnic near a place called "Eden Rock." The speaker describes his mother and father in idiosyncratic detail, down to the way his mother uses a wad of paper as a bottle stopper. The speaker's parents then beckon their son to cross the stream that separates them, insisting that doing so won't be hard. The speaker ends the poem by declaring that he hadn't thought that this is what "it"—most likely, dying—would be like. The poem is taken from Causley's final collection, A Field of Vision (1988), which contains a number of poems on similar subjects.
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“Eden Rock” Summary
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My parents are waiting for me somewhere just past Eden Rock. My father is twenty-five years old, wearing the patterned suit he always wore made from fabric from Ireland, with his little dog Jack, two years old again, shivering by his feet.
My twenty-three-year-old mother is wearing a floral dress that's cinched in at the waist, and she has a ribbon in her straw hat. She has laid out a stiff, white picnic blanket for us on the grass. The sunlight bounces off her hair, which is the same yellow color as wheat.
My mother pours tea for us from a Thermos container. She has also brought milk for the tea in an old condiment bottle, which once held British brown sauce, and has used a twist of paper as a bottle stopper. She slowly lays out our usual three plates, and the blue-painted cups we always use.
Suddenly the sky is filled with a dazzling white light, so bright it's like there are three suns shining at once. My mother places her hand above her eyes to shade them from the light, and looks at me from beyond a stream. My father is skimming a stone on the water's surface.
My parents calmly call me to from the other side of the stream. They gesture towards a path, and tell me that getting across the stream will be easier than I think it is.
This isn't how I thought it would be.
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“Eden Rock” Themes
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Family Ties
“Eden Rock” describes an encounter between a speaker and his parents, who are implied to be dead, as the latter prepare a picnic. The scene unfolds through a dream-like combination of memory and imagination, suggesting that the speaker is recalling a scene from his childhood while also seeing a vision of his dead parents in the present. By the end of the poem, it's implied that the speaker himself is close to death, and is about to rejoin his parents in some kind of afterlife. Indeed, the parents seem to have arrived in order to aid the speaker’s “crossing” to the other side. Accordingly, family ties are presented here as something strong and everlasting; though the speaker most likely hasn’t seen his parents in years, he turns to them as his own life comes to an end.
The poem opens by describing the speaker’s parents, who he says are waiting for him somewhere beyond the rock mentioned in the title. Once the speaker starts describing his parents, however, it’s clear that they aren’t literally waiting for him in the real, earthly world.
First off, both parents are still really young—25 and 23—as if they have been preserved in time. The speaker would be far too young to be writing a poem were his parents actually this age! Instead, the description of the father as wearing the “same” suit indicates that the speaker is reliving a childhood memory or imagining his parents as they were in their prime (perhaps in a moment from the speaker’s youth that left a lasting impression).
The father’s dog is there too, “still” just “two years old.” This small word—“still”—reinforces the idea that what's happening is outside of the usual logic of space and time. Again, the implication is that this is either a memory, an imagined encounter, or some sort of supernatural vision.
Regardless of the reality of this moment (or lack thereof!), the speaker describes his parents in tender detail. Even as there is something ghostly and unreal about this picnic scene, it’s also touchingly familiar and intimate. For example, the speaker describes the idiosyncratic way in which his mother handles a bottle of sauce, and the meticulous care with which she lays out the meal for him and his father. These details are so specific and particular that they could only be drawn from real experience, and the fact that they survive in the speaker’s memory is testament to the powerful effect they had on him at the time.
The final two stanzas then suggest the reason behind the parents’ presence. With the sky whitening in an unnatural way, perhaps hinting at the speaker’s approaching death, his parents casually beckon him across a small river. They stand on one side of the river—implied to be the side of the afterlife—and are calling the speaker to leave behind the earthly world and join them.
Even in this moment, in which the speaker is presumably far older than his parents appear to be, the dynamics between them remain steadfastly those of a child with his mother and father. They are advising him on how to proceed, offering him guidance and love. Though death is something many people fear, the speaker’s parents are there to tell him not to be worried.
The loving call from across the stream demonstrates the deeply held bond between the speaker and his parents. When the speaker says in the last line that he never thought “it” would be like this, this “it” most likely refers to his own approaching death—and accordingly, this makes sense of the parents’ central role in the poem. Put simply, thoughts of his parents comfort the speaker, and he feels that in some way his own transition into death will mean reunion with his loved ones. The poem, then, talks of the enduring strength of family bonds, demonstrating their deep-rooted place in the human psyche—for the speaker, at least.
Where this theme appears in the poem:- Lines 1-12
- Lines 14-19
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Death and the Afterlife
Though the poem never spells it out explicitly, there are a number of moments that suggest that the speaker is close to the end of his life—and that the poem is a meditation on mortality. The speaker finds some comfort in the idea that he may be reunited with his loved ones in the afterlife, but it ultimately ends ambiguously: the speaker says that he never thought “it” (implied to be death) would be “like this,” but his feelings toward whatever “this” remain unclear. Accordingly, though the speaker does project a calm and accepting attitude towards death, the poem evokes the unsettling mystery that surrounds death too.
There is something ethereal about the poem from start to finish, with a few key moments making it seems clear that this is no literal picnic. For one thing, the poem is vague about its setting. Eden Rock isn't an actual place—though of course the name contains a Biblical allusion to the Garden of Eden. This vagueness subtly suggests the mystery of death, the way in which the only way to know death is to actually die. And the speaker’s parents, presented as enjoying a leisurely picnic as though they have all the time in the world (which, being dead, perhaps they do!), seem more like apparitions than real people. They are both preserved in—or restored to—their youth, and perhaps this was a time in which they seemed particularly full of life. The youthful vitality and caring attitude of the parents offer a somewhat comforting vision of the afterlife.
But there is still something ghostly about the way this scene is described. For example, the way that the light shines on the speaker’s mother suggests both a sense of angelic purity and a gently unsettling hint that what the speaker is experiencing is not real. This is heightened by the surreal turn that the poem takes in line 13, when the “sky whitens as if lit by three suns.” The “three suns” is likely an allusion to the Christian holy trinity of the Father, Son, and the Holy Ghost—reinforcing the Biblical reference in the poem’s title. On that level, then, the three suns can be seen as a comforting sign, evoking the promise of an afterlife—and also a kind of mirror of the three people within this particular family unit. But the way in which this bleached light suffuses the poem also heightens the image’s unreal atmosphere, gently reminding the reader of the way in which what happens when people die remains a mystery.
Soon after this it becomes clear that the speaker’s parents are there to guide him across a stream. They tell him “Crossing is not as hard as you might think.” “Crossing” is often used as a way of referring to the transition people make between life and death, and the stream is a likely allusion to Greek mythology—in which a boatman would transport the souls of the newly deceased across a river and into the underworld. The speaker’s parents are there to reassure him that death need not be something to fear. Their presence also suggests a general sense of acceptance—the speaker has lived has life, has loved and been loved, and accordingly can be more at peace with the idea of dying.
The speaker ends the poem by declaring that he “had not thought it would be like this.” The word “it” is deliberately vague, though, in all likelihood, it refers to dying. Perhaps the speaker’s inability to actually say the word “death” indicates that the speaker still feels tentative about dying. Even the thought of being reunited with his parents in the afterlife can’t entirely assuage anxiety about the end of life. Ultimately, then, the poem presents the way in which someone might be comforted by memories and emotions as they approach death, but offers no false sense of knowledge or understanding. Death remains a mystery; though, for the speaker at least, it does not necessarily have to be feared.
Where this theme appears in the poem:- Line 1
- Lines 2-8
- Line 12
- Line 13
- Lines 13-20
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Line-by-Line Explanation & Analysis of “Eden Rock”
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Lines 1-4
They are waiting ...
... at his feet.The poem opens on a deliberately ambiguous note: people described only as "they" await the speaker "somewhere beyond Eden Rock." Eden Rock isn't a real place, but it gently sets up the dreamlike quality of what is to follow, drawing in the reader's curiosity. "Eden" alludes to the biblical Garden of Eden, subtly suggesting that whoever "they" are, they aren't in this mortal world anymore.
The colon at the end of the line indicates that what follows will to some degree be about clarifying exactly who "they" are. Lines 2 to 4 are then devoted to the speaker's father. More specifically, they are devoted to reconstructing what looks be some kind of memory about him. These lines utilize many caesuras to add detail to this description, evoking a sense of care and attentiveness as the speaker goes about building an image of his father.
The father is presented as relatively young (he is 25). The specific age is a strong clue that this is not a real encounter, but some kind of dream, memory, or combination of the two. It means that there is a tension between the measured, adult-sounding tone of the speaker and the age of his father, introducing a note of mystery to the poem (because if the speaker's father were really this young, the speaker wouldn't be old enough to be reciting this poem!).
Indeed, the details about the father support the idea that he is somehow preserved in a particular moment in time. He is wearing the "same suit"—perhaps the "same" one as in the speaker's childhood memories—and his little dog is "still two years old." This "still" suggests that normally this would not be the case—probably because both the father and his dog are long dead.
The "Genuine Irish Tweed" is a very specific type of material as well, adding further nuance to this image of the speaker's father. There's a subtle sense of pride in the fact that the suit is made from a "Genuine" material, perhaps suggesting that this family is of only modest means.
In the stanza's second two lines, gentle /t/ consonance evokes the trembling movement of the dog, but also the way that the image itself is built on the shaky foundations of the imagination:
Of Genuine Irish Tweed, his terrier Jack
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Lines 5-8
My mother, twenty-three, ...
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Lines 9-12
She pours tea ...
... cups painted blue. -
Lines 13-16
The sky whitens ...
... the water. Leisurely, -
Lines 17-20
They beckon to ...
... be like this.
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“Eden Rock” Poetic Devices & Figurative Language
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Alliteration
Gentle alliteration is used throughout "Eden Rock." For example, note in the /t/ sounds of lines 3 and 4 (the same sound is used as consonance here too). They seem to serve two functions. The first of these is to make the lines sound carefully constructed, as though the speaker is making a deliberate and concerted effort to create a faithful image of his father. As a delicate sound too, the /t/ alliteration also seems to bring the image of the small "trembling" dog to life:
... Tweed, his terrier Jack
Still two years old and trembling ...The speaker uses alliteration when describing his mother as well, the repeated /d/ and /r/ sounds in "dress," "drawn," "ribbon," and "straw" again making the description sound careful and precise.
Another evocative moment of alliteration occurs in line 8:
Her hair, the colour of wheat ...
These two /h/ sounds demand an exhalation of breath when read aloud, which conjures up the sound of wind to emphasize the outdoor setting described in this stanza.
There is also alliteration across lines 11 and 12 through the repeated /p/ and /s/ sounds in "paper," "slowly," "sets," "same," "plates," and "painted." Aside from having a similar effect to some of the earlier alliteration—the sound of careful poetic construction conveying the way that the speaker's memory/vision of his parents is carefully put together—it's particularly notable that there are three words that begin with /p/ sounds. This subtly supports the image of the family unit—the trio of son, mother and father—and anticipates the "three suns" of line 13.
Line 17's use of alliteration is again highly significant. The speaker describes his parents "beckon[ing]" to him "from the other bank," seemingly reassuring him that they will be there to meet him when he dies ("crosses"). The two /b/ sounds chime with one another from either end of the line, representing the physical and metaphorical divide between the speaker and his parents, and between life and death.
Where alliteration appears in the poem:- Line 2: “s,” “s”
- Line 3: “G,” “T,” “t,” “J”
- Line 4: “t,” “t”
- Line 5: “dr”
- Line 6: “Dr,” “r,” “st,” “r”
- Line 7: “s,” “r,” “st”
- Line 8: “H,” “h”
- Line 9: “Th,” “th”
- Line 11: “p,” “s,” “s”
- Line 12: “s,” “p,” “p”
- Line 14: “M,” “m”
- Line 15: “s,” “s”
- Line 16: “s”
- Line 17: “b,” “b”
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Allusion
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Caesura
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Consonance
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Enjambment
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End-Stopped Line
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Simile
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"Eden Rock" Vocabulary
Select any word below to get its definition in the context of the poem. The words are listed in the order in which they appear in the poem.
- Irish Tweed
- Terrier
- Sprigged
- Thermos
- H.P. Sauce
- Cork
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(Location in poem: Line 3: “Irish Tweed”)
Irish tweed is a type of wool-based patterned cloth which, as the name suggests, comes from Ireland.
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Form, Meter, & Rhyme Scheme of “Eden Rock”
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Form
"Eden Rock" is a formally regular poem, employing quatrain stanzas all the way through apart from one instance at the end. The final two stanzas are broken up into three lines and one line, respectively. Each stanza has a clear purpose in the poem's trajectory too. Stanzas 1 and 2 are meticulous descriptions of the speaker's parents, who are depicted in their younger days. Stanza 3 describes a vivid picnic scene, probably based on or inspired by the speaker's memory, given just how specific some of the details are. In the fourth stanza, though, things take a turn for the strange, with the sky becoming intensely white and the speaker's parents seeming to suddenly be further away from him. From here until the poem's end, it becomes apparent the poem is just as much about the speaker's own death as it his parents.
The quatrain form works well for the measured way in which the poem unfolds. As described above, each stanza has a clear and distinct function in the poem. That said, most of the phrases are either longer or shorter than a single line (leading to many moments of caesura and enjambment). This works in tension with the quatrain form, and increases the sense that the speaker's attention is solely on his parents (at least initially) rather than making his lines exactly match the poetic form he's created.
As mentioned, there is one significant disruption to the quatrain form. This occurs in the last line, which is given a stanza break, creating one three-line and one single line stanza. The final line occupies in its own space entirely, suggesting two important points. Firstly, there is the simple fact that line is in itself an important one; its isolation shows the reader that it is an extremely significant moment in the poem. It also creates a divide in what should be the fourth quatrain, mirroring the way in which the speaker sees himself as divided from his parents—they on the river bank in the land of the dead, and he on the side of the living.
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Meter
"Eden Rock" is an unusual poem in terms of its meter. Overall, the lines are too varied to say that the poem adheres to a specific metrical scheme. The lines tend to have five stresses and approximately ten syllables, but this is not rigid. The poem prefers to strike a more "leisurely" tone, supporting the way in which the speaker is—for the most part—reassured by the presence of his parents.
With the above in mind, it's important to note that there are moments in which certain lines conform to iambic pentameter (five iambs—metrical feet with an unstressed-stressed pattern—per line). Line 4 does so, for example:
Still two years old and trembling at his feet.
Because the poem is not dominated by iambic pentameter, lines like this just feel like part of its overall casual tone. The last line, however, is different. This, too, is distinctly iambic:
I had not thought that it would be like this.
This has a stately, even elegiac, sound to it. And given that the line is isolated by itself, it leaves the poem on a note of doubt and uncertainty. The iambic pentameter feels formal and stiff in a way that is almost alien to the rest of the poem, reinforcing the idea that this line is a break with the rest.
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Rhyme Scheme
"Eden Rock" has a regular rhyme scheme, following an ABAB pattern throughout each stanza. Most of the rhymes, however, are not perfect rhymes. Instead, the poem uses slant rhymes for most of the rhyming pairs: Rock/Jack, suit/feet, dress/grass, hat/light, and so on. The rhymes are mostly linked through consonant sounds. This has an interesting effect on the poem. On the one hand it suggests precision, which supports the idea that the speaker is meticulously reconstructing a memory and/or vision of his parents. On the other, the fact that the rhymes don't conform to the usual expectations also suggests that there is something unreliable about the poem's exploration of the imagination and memory—that it's hard to know what is real and what is not.
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“Eden Rock” Speaker
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Though it's never specified who the speaker is exactly, by the end of the poem it is strongly suggested that this is a person who is close to death. (Note that there is no gender in the poem; we've used the male pronoun in this guide only to avoid a confusing over-reliance on "they," and because the poem has often been interpreted as being about the poet's own parents.)
Whoever the speaker is, it's clear that he feels a strong and enduring bond with his parents. Indeed, the first three stanzas are preoccupied with constructing a faithful memory and/or vision his parents in their younger years. The speaker builds an image of them through lovingly and carefully selected details. These details, in turn, further suggest the speaker comes from a modest economic British background, given the reference to his father's pride in his Irish Tweed suit and his mother's resourceful use of an H.P. Sauce bottle and paper to carry milk.
Despite his parents' youth, the poem is not written from a child's perspective. The speaker sounds like someone older, who has known life. This becomes especially clear by the end of the poem, when the speaker's parents appear to be calling to him from the land of the dead (the poem heavily alludes to classical mythology through its reference to crossing a stream). In part, then, the parents' role is to reassure the speaker that dying—the "it" of line 20—is nothing to fear, and that they are waiting for him on the other side of the life/death divide.
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“Eden Rock” Setting
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The poem starts off by being intentionally vague about where exactly it takes place: "somewhere beyond Eden Rock." Eden Rock is not based on a real location, though the word
"Eden" probably makes readers think of the biblical Garden of Eden—the first hint that what's happening here isn't necessarily happening in the real world. The vagueness of the "somewhere" also suggests that, though what follows feels very specific, there remains something unreliable about the world that the poem conjures (most likely because it is in the speaker's imagination and/or memory).More specifically, the poem takes place, at least at first, outside during a picnic. The weather is warm and sunny (the speaker's mother wears a dress), and there is a sense that the speaker's family is in no rush at all. Readers might get the sense that what the speaker is describing is actually based on some sort of happy childhood memory (especially since his parents appear to be so young).
The third stanza describes this picnic in more detail, before the setting takes a surreal turn in the fourth. Suddenly, things don't seem as real as they initially did—the sky now grows so bright it seems "lit by three suns." This is disorientating and at odds with the calm and reassuring description of the picnic in the preceding stanza. It also suddenly is revealed that the speaker's parents are on the other side of a stream. The poem clearly plays with an allusion to ancient mythology here, suggesting that the parent have "crossed" over to the afterlife or underworld, while the speaker is still in the land of the living. The parents' role becomes clear: to help get the speaker across on to their side.
The setting, then, might also be thought of as taking place in the speaker's mind or imagination in the moments before he dies.
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Literary and Historical Context of “Eden Rock”
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Literary Context
Charles Causley was an important figure in British poetry of the 20th century. He was born at the tail-end of World War I in 1917 and lived until 2003. Over the course of his career, Causley produced a lot of writing—and this varied between poems, short stories, plays, and works for children. His poems are often noted for their straightforward and direct language Causley was never an especially fashionable poet, but the number of significant 20th century poets that have paid tribute to him speaks volumes. Ted Hughes ("Hawk Roosting"), who served as England's Poet Laureate, thought Causley would be perfect for the role: "this marvelously resourceful, original poet, yet among all known poets the only one who could be called a man of the people, in the old, best sense." Philip Larkin ("An Arundel Tomb"), Seamus Heaney ("Mid-Term Break"), and W.H. Auden (among many others) also thought very highly of Causley.
Causley was a fairly reserved man, rarely traveling beyond his native Cornwall. In fact, the mythology and folklore of Cornwall (in the south-west of England) play a significant role throughout his works. His poems are especially popular in that part of the country. He was a man with a deep love for literature, especially fond of poets like John Keats ("Bright Star," "Ode on a Grecian Urn"), John Clare ("Autumn"), and Federico Garcia Lorca ("Romance Sonámbulo"). And perhaps this poem in particular shows the influence of the 13th century Italian poet, Dante Alighieri. Lines 14 to 20 seem to allude to newly deceased souls crossing a river into the afterlife, a prominent idea in Classical Greek and Roman mythology that features in Dante's Inferno. Indeed, though the "three suns" allusion of line 13 seems to refer to the Christian idea of the Holy Trinity (the Father, Son, and the Holy Spirit), perhaps the classical allusion marks the speaker out as a literary-minded person.
Historical Context
Though he lived until 2003, Causley is very much a 20th century poet. Indeed, his life was touched by both of the two most significant events of the century: the World Wars. His father died from ill health problems he developed serving in the First World War, and perhaps this informs Causley's choice in this poem to portray the father-figure in his youth. Causley himself served in the Navy during World War II, writing prolifically throughout and seemingly working well under the pressure.
Growing up in early 20th century Cornwall, Causley had a Christian upbringing, which seems to gently inform "Eden Rock" (in the title not least). However, he was not an especially religious man, though he continued to pray throughout his life. Despite being a fairly reclusive man, Causley's poetry was celebrated by the official society of his day. He was awarded the Queen's Gold Medal for Poetry in 1967, and in 1986 was made a Commander of the British Empire (a symbolic honor rather than an actual duty!).
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More “Eden Rock” Resources
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External Resources
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"The Most Unfashionable Poet Alive" — An excellent and insightful essay by the literary critic Dana Gioia about Causley and his work.
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A Documentary on "Cornwall's Native Poet" — An interesting documentary about Causley, featuring commentary by poets including Simon Ari.
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Get to Know Cornwall — The official tourism site for England's southwestern-most county, Cornwall.
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Further Poems and Readings — A number of other Causley poems, with readings by the poet himself.
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Causley in Song — A musical setting of a poem by Causley about his beloved Cornwall.
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LitCharts on Other Poems by Charles Causley
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